The Dawn Sets

Sleepless years
Serenade nights with my jaded spun
Within the dream of unshutted eyes we meet
Yet, the shadow of you sets along the risen dawn

Ray climbs atop the hills of clouds
I'm like a soul dwells within an empty square
Which only replaced by brain and tasks
Never been tired unless without you

These eyes keep nailing
To the walls of past's projections
Droop by the reluctant heart
Much better when I stop running,

Chasing the absent of you

At the brim of limit, I sing
The song of my bias towards you
Towards time
And towards my incapability,

To forget you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:22 PM
A beautifully poignant poem Yanny, expressed with fantastic imagery and emotion. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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February 8, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations on your win, Yanny ! Great flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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February 5, 2018 at 10:31 PM
I love the rythmic spiralling movement in your poem. Congrats on this well deserved win.
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February 7, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thank you Line Gauthier :) I am hlad that you like the poem, wishing you a great day =D
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Great poem Yanny, you wrote this very well, I can see why it is your best poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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February 7, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thank you Silent One, I am very glad to be part of your contest ??????
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July 31, 2017 at 3:38 AM
- Dear Yanny - Nice to see you - Thanks for this lovely poem - I hope all is well with you - Regards and big hugs from //Anne-Lise :)
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August 1, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Hello Anne, how are youuu? All is great here, really happy to see you come by to this poem, miss you from me and Ken xoxo
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July 13, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Hi Janny, thanks for the visit! I enjoyed your poem, I always love how you express yourself. Hugs Rick.
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July 15, 2017 at 9:58 AM
Thank you Rick! I was so inspired of a movie when I wrote this poem :D thank you for the lovely visit, you made my day!
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