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The Dawn of Sunset

I loved you from the onset ... at the twilight of our first romantic sunrise Fading rainbow rays of the morning, our love had such young, bright eyes Dashing across the field of promises, under the full strength of the sun We had a love so vibrant, a love so very young Time had no relevance for us, we were two star children orbiting each other in love The gravity of attraction pulling us closer and closer each day Heart to heart meetings in a meadow on warm spring afternoons Our lips in sync, fingers caressing one another Emotions moving in tune We had a love so exuberant, a love so maturing As our summer of single, one-on-one happiness merged into wedded bliss We vowed to give our betrothed hearts a passionate autumn kiss Time was of no significance to us, we were so madly in love Thus, when our children budded and their fruit fell from the family tree, the radiant autumn sun sparkled through the kaleidoscopic leaves We had a love so enduring, a love so faithfully strong That over the years, our love has only grown I loved you til the very end ... as the dawn of sunset slowly settled in The brilliant, golden rays of the evening years, showed our love had such ancient, luminous eyes, which dried away all the intervening tears Sitting on the edge of winter's cold embrace, basking in the ebbing strength of the sun I see every loving moment in every wrinkle on your face Now at the dawn of our setting sun ... We have a love so timeless, a love so ageless A love forever young

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Date: 5/25/2017 2:28:00 PM
A beautiful love poem you have written. Hugs Darlene
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Date: 5/8/2017 6:11:00 AM
Love how you blended family, love, imagery and Nature to create this superb romantic poem! A7 and a fav...
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:30:00 PM
Such a beautiful, uplifting poem of love, from the bud of youth to mature fruition, Freddie. I really enjoyed this one!
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:20:00 AM
- Thank you my friend, a pleasure to read this beautiful poem - Your description makes the image alive Freddie - A big 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2017 7:07:00 PM
Wow wow WOW! You couldn't have written this beautiful piece with more feeling or meaning FreddIe. I love the brilliant way you use the seasons as a metaphor for your time shared together. This is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. Needless to say it is going straight into my Faves! 7++ Aloha, Connie This is the PS poem I have chosen to share!
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