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The Dawn Broke Every Bone

The Dawn Broke every bone While fighting the Darkness; Still struggling to Rise, She clawed her way Over the Skyline, Tearing herself on Skyscrapers until the Whole Sky Was stained Red; Eyes were averted- Everyone agreed- It was Too Soon.

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Date: 2/11/2014 11:49:00 PM
There is an underlying recurring theme, tho' I am not 100% certain, it is a conscious effort!...Wonderful piece; I love this!//xoxoxo//Sinclair
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Cameron Hartley
Date: 2/12/2014 9:58:00 AM
I did notice I wrote a bunch of dark poems in a row if that's what you're saying lol. In my mind it's good; I've been writing way too many gushy love poems it makes it hard to take myself seriously lol.

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