The Dawn

The wind blew gently, rustling the leaves of oak
Skylark flitting from bough to twig
Dawn breaking from its evening cloak
Silence surrendering to new life's jig.

Fenland life awakening, yawning to the rise
Of sun's warming beauty, filling oe'r Earths skies.
The moon fades with gradual ease of time
Its evening shadows eclipsed by suns' rising prime.

Streams of ribbon meander, gentle dreams
Wander by the birch of forest glen.
Glistening, sparkling reflections of sun's beams
Filtering heavenward; raiment of soft sheen.

Cock crows his hour, robin sings his song,
Buckish hare leaps, birds of game play
Hide and seek with shooters throng;
Beaten up, open sighted, birds of prey.

Floral quilted hues upon carpet woven green,
Nectar guided insects hover on the wing.
Gold, incense, myrrh gifted to their Queen,
Warbled sonnets echo thus, this beautiful wonderous thing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Jordan Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Thanks, Edward for the recent visit. I've gone back to your poems and chosen my favorite and this is it. Emily Dickinson reputedly often read poems backwards, referring to the "plunge" from the back. This poem works wonderfully both frontwards and backwards, a testament to the beautiful imagery. A 7.
Clark Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 2:25 PM
Hi Richard, thanks for your kind comment and i am honoured to have been mentioned in the same breath as Emily Dickenson. I have a book of 'Selected Poems' by her and I like her poetry; always makes you think. Best wishes Edward
Hamilton Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 4:09 PM
stunning imagery Edward well rhymed and great flow superb 7 hugs
Clark Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Hi Shadow, thank you for your kind comment. I wrote The Dawn some time ago and is one of my faves. Eddie
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