The Dawn

My heart is full with thoughts of you
My mind tries to control
And Oh the day is long
The dew that settles on my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:35 AM
Sweet poem, and well deserved to be featured this week! ~ Carrie
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December 9, 2008 at 5:38 PM
Congrats on your featured write! Happy holidays! Love, Shar
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December 8, 2008 at 7:53 PM
Congratulations Christina on "The Dawn" being featured. Vince
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December 8, 2008 at 1:00 PM
Dear Christinia - congratulations on your feature of the week. Nice metaphor here. Lainie
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December 7, 2008 at 5:13 PM
Christina - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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December 7, 2008 at 4:30 PM
Wow Christina, you have a wonderful talent of speaking volumes to your readers in just a few short lines. Thank You for sharing your passion of literature with us all as I say Congratulations for being featured... MPK
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 3:19 PM
Lovely little poem, and nicely featured this week! congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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December 7, 2008 at 2:25 PM
Nice concise way to convey your thoughts. I really like the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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September 17, 2008 at 6:05 AM
There's something deep within this poem. Wonderful writing! love Chitra
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