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Ice cream Sweet peach flavor At the peach packing shed Too hot to enjoy ambience UMMM!! Sweet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Sara, you got me wanting to eat an ice cream! Yummy!~Olive ELoisa =)
Anish Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Sounds like a tasty date! Peace ice cram - never had it but I want to! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
La France Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Sara, nicely written, I am actually having ice cream right now, it is very hot here in my little part of Canada and thanks for visiting my poem, my cloud
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June 18, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Sara, I enjoyed your "sweet" cinquain! The ice cream sounds delightful (I'm an ice cream junkie), the heat not so much. Love, Kim
Roper Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Sara, you have picked my fav. icecream. a 7 Hugs Eve
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