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in the dimness of the tea lounge i stared into the dark depths that were your pupils and clung to every word that escaped the curve of your lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/1/2013 12:09:00 AM
Wow Rachel this simply beautiful! I could hear your words roll of the page as I read this beautiful poem, written from your beautiful hand and heart! I love it Rachel... Keep up the great work! :)
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Date: 8/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
Hi Rachel. A most sensual write...Well done... Regards, Ken..
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