The Date

in the dimness of the tea lounge
i stared into the dark depths
that were your pupils
and
clung to every word that escaped
the curve of your lips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 1, 2013 at 12:09 AM
Wow Rachel this simply beautiful! I could hear your words roll of the page as I read this beautiful poem, written from your beautiful hand and heart! I love it Rachel... Keep up the great work! :)
Carroll Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Hi Rachel. A most sensual write...Well done... Regards, Ken..
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