The Darkness At Noon

I have known darkness--

the murky ebony of a loveless marriage;
terrifying blackness, death threatened by a husband's hand;
oppressive onyx, my children alone in his shadowy presence;
jeering jet, a son entrapped by substance abuse, 
      abandoned by his father;
maddening midnight, the terror when my boy died.
This weight of darkness I have known,
                                                         lived,
                                                                   owned.

Yet, I know nothing of the dark depths the Divine endured
     for me . . . for the world--
     carried on His shoulders,
     laid upon His back,
     nailed into His hands, His feet;
     crushed into His head . . .
blackest terror of isolation complete
when His Father turned His face away,
away from sin's dreadful cost.

The universe in the grip of the eclipse of God--
the darkness at noon.

Copyright, 4/29/2014
Faye Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:31 PM
wow, this is so amazing. I think it deserved first place. Congrats. It was utterly beautiful in its profundity.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 1:32 PM
Amazing write! Congratulations on your win! Lori
Gibson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, Lori.
Torres Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:32 PM
very well written.. I awe this piece.. Congratulations ,Faye!!! :O))
Gibson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:20 PM
AiyaH, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and appreciate it.
Mehta Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Thanks for your support and congrats on a win in my poem, Faye
Gibson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:20 PM
Dr. Mehta, I am humbled by your placement of my poem in your contest. Thank you.
Lindley Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Truly breath taking words that inspire a deeper understanding of sacrifice! The human spirit endures all if love still resides in the human heart..
Gibson Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Thank you. I value your opinion for a admire your work.
Nance Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Powerful words Faye. Amazing. Good luck in the contest. :)
Gibson Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Thank you. I value your opinion for a admire your work. Oops...posted that as a comment on my own poem.
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