The Darkness At Noon

Allow me to climb thirteen steps in peace
As you leave, look back show me no sorrow
For these dark gallows will soon take my life
Innocence cares not, for my tomorrows

A final kiss, these hands growing colder
Forgive me each day winds caress your skin
And think of me warmly, as you grow older
Show no tears, as I will see you again

Let me say , until and never forget
So I may leave you now, without fear
Having tasted your lips for the last time
Know this, I'll be with you always my dear
Up each step I'll hear the sound of your heart
I'll whisper I love you, as I depart


contest.. Darkness at Noon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ludden Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 11:55 AM
I wonder how many, in their hour of execution, have thoughts like these. But then, I am sure many could indeed. Your poem conveys the insight that even those who may have offended, are still very much a part of humanity--and thus worthy of humane treatment. But alas, execution in any form, is certainly not humane!
Ludden Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 12:33 PM
It may be, but it should not be!
Parker Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 12:29 PM
isn't that our internal struggle?
Gorelick Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:46 PM
Well, it certainly is dark, ..I would never have thought of this idea..great job. BG
Parker Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:09 PM
thank you Barbara, yes I was hoping it would be different
Anglesey Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Captivating and stark. Well done :)
Parker Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:08 PM
thank you Karen for reading and for your kind response
Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:56 PM
this is a lovely art word and you got it down on paper just the right, languid way, frederick... huggs
Parker Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 5:06 PM
thank you Nette, for your kindness
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