The Darkest Cloud I'Ve Ever Seen

I was given a heart full
 Of love and forgiveness,
Though I didn't really have a choice,
 I've never really spoke my mind,
I've never really had 
 A voice.
And every time someone made me cry,
 I'd forgive them
I didn't want to
 So i don't know why.
People say my heart is pure,
 But its the blackest cloud I've ever seen,
No one knows the inside,
 Its good to them..
    It's bad to me.
Don't get me wrong
 I love the good things for them that i do
I just want to feel okay
This war inside my heart,
 It's what I've gotten used to.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Burchett Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 8:15 PM
Awsome poem it realy spoke to me .
Croy Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Thank you :)
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Hannah. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 3:21 AM
wow..it's funny how one can used to darkness like that.. enjoyed,..p.d.
Croy Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 6:08 AM
Thank you :)
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