The Darkening Storm

as rain begins to fall from the sky
my forgotten memories make me cry
I feel forsaken and I don't know why
my entire body begs to die
as tears slowly fall from the sky

the rain comes down harder still
and I force down a bitter pill
a pill of sorrow and regret
of all the fears I've never met
of what I should have always been
all just memories in the end

the sky blackens with the storm
and I begin to slowly mourn
everything that has been torn
my heart, my soul, is all forlorn
as I darken with the storm

near the end of the day
the rain begins to ebb away
but the darkness lingers still
and I wonder why, until
I realize with a start
that the darkness is my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 6:13 AM
I think if you dwell to much on your regrets and disappointments you will never move forward... it's hard, I know, but well worth the effort... God bless, Keith
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:54 PM
Write some new poems, Dork! Luv (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^u^
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:52 PM
Well tell me next time, Cause I did some stupid shi. . . stuff. . . Let me know when you like me again/wanna go back out. . . .
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:45 PM
K, So what did I do to suffocate you?
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:42 PM
Idk, Just wanna know. Is that a no for the goin back out? Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^n^
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:31 PM
And where in Springfield, Missouri do you live?
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:05 PM
Well, My friend can be a dumbutt. We could try again, But it's all up to you. . . Just tell me what I did to suffocate you and I will work on it. And my friend will NEVER EVER talk to you again, Promise you that. Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 5:23 PM
I knew you wouldn't answer. . . . ^n^ Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 5:05 PM
Why did you go out with me if you knew you weren't looking for a relationship in the first place? Was it fun for you, While it lasted? Was I just another "THING" in your life that you knew you were just gonna throw away the next day? I want the honest to god TRUTH!!!!! Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^n^
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 5:00 PM
I have a SERIOUS question to ask you, But you don't have to answer it if you don't wanna? . . . . Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^.^
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 4:58 PM
You know you can write on any of my poems now, right? Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^_^
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 11:28 AM
I added you as a friend on facebook. . .
Matheny Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:32 AM
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
Matheny Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 7:44 PM
can we at least be friends?
Matheny Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 4:54 AM
Sowwy for screwin up the relationship. . . :..(
Burton Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 8:03 PM
be good as far as the heart and life will automaticly be good to you, i like this because its very truthful. what do you think of my poetry?
Payne Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:53 PM
wow this is so profound and heartfelt. You have put your heart into this, and it makes me feel heartbroken to read it. Wonderful job, keep it up. Blessings, ~Michaela~
Matheny Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:52 PM
*CRY* *SOB* I suck ass
Matheny Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:33 PM
That's all you have to say when all day I've been thinking I did something wrong. . . I've also been crying and cutting since 12:00pm. . . Thanks!
Runk Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:13 PM
Homie cant you just at least be friends wit her? You really made her upset and hurt her real bad. I love her like my sister if you just tell her then maybe she will quit blammin herself. think bout it, you really hurt a sweet and loving that did nothing to you but yet youre ignorin her.
Runk Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Hey homie my name is Kylin, I'm Alexz's brother (Not her real brother). So I hear dat u dumpped my sissy. May I ask why? She has been cryin to me all day, And I don't like it when she cry like dat. So could you please tell me why?
Moreno Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 3:04 PM
Such a poignant poem...Raul
Watts Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 12:37 PM
hey, you, why arent you talking to your girlfreind. why did you block her? see i told you i can get alittle over protective and i am now
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