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The Dark Side of the Night Sky

When darkness dives to save the day Subconscious minds drift off astray, Bursting with burning hot desire, Setting the night on phantom fire. Under the dark sky's shelter, they Explore a slew of shades of grey. Under the moonlight, sly and lush, Minds’ surpluses hover in hush. Disturbing dreams, daring and bold, Don’t hold back begging to unfold - Sweat sets into nightmarish mode Of feverish and icy cold. As day’s safe undercover blown, As night’s stark terrors frantic flown, There’s no escape from dire pursuit, Deafening pleas for help fall mute. Demons of darkness, hot or cold, Prance in the dark, not to be told… Burnt out, their sacred secrets die Under the oath of the night sky. February 23, 2022

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Date: 5/1/2022 12:50:00 PM
Your poem measures up to many of the others I see on this list. So descriptive and well written. congrats.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 5/1/2022 4:24:00 PM
Humbled. Thanks. M.
Date: 5/1/2022 7:14:00 AM
"There’s no escape from dire pursuit" - Great truth betwixt. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Margarita! <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 3/5/2022 6:05:00 PM
Enjoyed the images you evoke. Thank you for your visit.
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Date: 2/23/2022 2:09:00 PM
The dark night skies hold many secrets, sometimes just dreams, sometimes true desires. But these fantasies remain hidden from the light of day and it's probably best that they do. Hugs.
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Date: 2/23/2022 9:34:00 AM
Who needs a novel when dreams are so novel? Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/23/2022 1:03:00 PM
Night has a lot to offer :) Aloha!

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