The Dark Side of Love

Wings clipped, and then caged –my dearest; Declaration. Is this love not true?
Tuesday, February 02

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/5/2016 10:57:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Date: 2/9/2016 10:46:00 AM
Welcome to our garden. Most interesting gem you've penned.
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/11/2016 12:42:00 PM
It's been a lovely visit so far. Thank you for the gracious welcome.
Date: 2/5/2016 8:59:00 PM
very interesting one. It was nice to see some of your poetry tonight.
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/11/2016 12:42:00 PM
Always happy to share. Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 2/4/2016 9:35:00 AM
Clipped wings and caged...could be more a show of jealousy than true love! // paul
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/11/2016 12:49:00 PM
Well said Paul. Love is one of those matters that is incredibly intricate yet is instantly recognized...
Date: 2/4/2016 9:34:00 AM
great image and question you display through this haiku! you handle this form well, not everyone can!
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/11/2016 12:51:00 PM
This means a lot to me Sandra, thank you. Haiku has been my favorite form for as long as I can remember.
Date: 2/3/2016 12:52:00 PM
- A good question on the last line ..... well done Haiku, Luaer ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/3/2016 9:21:00 PM
I hope the judge of the contest thinks so too. Thanks Anne!
Date: 2/3/2016 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku dear Luaer! A seven from me!
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/3/2016 9:19:00 PM
I'm glad it left an impression. Thank you Demetrios.
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