someday this isolation will end and freedom will mean going places (thank God).
(a Senryu string poem) High school girls are just thoughtless and vague - too damn dumb to be afraid. Trusting too quickly - believing things that are said - unaware of risk. Small and powerless, chickens cooped from feral foxes - peaches for picking. So accompany me on walks, to the store and guard me like a penny. Look - we're women - junior grade - and conscious of dark potential. Breasted Americans face a dark rainbow of threats - we are mortal. But ANY of us can encounter unscheduled evil like nightmares from hell. Yes, that means you rough tough males who glide through life as if untouchable.
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