The Dark Poet -Contest-

A little tale about the real me
twisted all inside as can be
the visions of the end
is all i see
F.T.W. setting my self free

waking up with the thought 
i survived.
"SURVIVED!"  another dream
holding my head under water
no one can hear my screams

cursing each and everyone 
for this demon has won
taking over my soul
ripping out all my sanity
reliving over and over
the day i took my own life
my own hell is more than an element of a  dream
slicing my most deepest vain, with the dullest  knife
a fear so dark lashing out a terrorized scream

reality, to sanity, losing my main brain
a deep dark fear lurking, red blood stain
creeping up a MOSH caught  in the way
F.T.W. we are all to blame
inside I dread the day of my rebirth
shout my guts into space for I  have  faced
to slow down the beast with a  potent power of radiation 
a frame out demon skinning the philosophy you once new
an evil more than vile,   a poison worst than sin

motivating his way in to my voyage of my on tormented life
a DEMON dust from Neptune possessing   me its rings
never to think in my wildest observation
I would encounter my own depths of a zero pointless energy
giving to my by the lighted gravity of humane
restricted  on the eyes, for the ones  who do not wish to see
a trance faster than the speed of light
ending myself to a forever night
fighting with them who reject to see a demon so twisted
dropped from the cosmos of realistic 
no one wanting to acknowledge the relativistic way  
that time  travel out*** and Demons travel in***
lost forever in this rotten being
making me shout out loud to he 
who knows my name
dealing  with the devils  Darkest  Poet
in a Dark Poets game


      -contest-
just a dream soupppppers lol. : )
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Duncan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 1:18 PM
quite nice the way you did this,,, made me think of a few movies and my poem Fireflies ;} And the dream I had last night about my daughter disappearing down a dark street. Thank you for making me one of your fav poets,xx
Horsman Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 4:33 AM
this is so visual, so realistic, love your dreams, and your creations....
Mahrie Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:44 AM
this one is very Good the way you describe ....if its a dream we live in dreamin and awake state yet i believe we sojourn live in a mysterious ways. Good write D ..
Cole Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:36 AM
i love this
Conway Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:12 AM
I Like it, Very Dark-just the way I like it!~Tirzah~
Loving Iii Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 1:50 PM
wow cda really has a crush on you!
Eggins Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:25 AM
I love your vibe lol you got something .. well written ... big smile thanks for the comments on my poetry its much appreciated love Jayne
Gomez Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 7:53 PM
sheesh it gave me goosebumps!
Spence Sr Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Hey, this is quite a slam! I have been watching some slam poetry recently and they are very interesting. I like the flow of energy. Great job! Joseph
Haick Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the contest, P.D. Well-deserved indeed! Peace, Audrey
Russell Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:42 PM
An interesting point of view. Enjoyed the read. Terry
Hales Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:10 AM
hya i am glad its just a dream ..but wow i have shivers up my spine lololol very good !!! sarah x
Pline Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 10:29 PM
I once knew a dark poet. Beauty in every line he spoke yet haunting ghosts in his past. Of course I hope not in your case for I am very excited to read more. -Victorias
Crisci Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 11:19 AM
What a brilliant poem expressed in the darkest, bloody way! Suicide, for some people is relief from pain and self-made hell. I will never suggest it to anyone...life is too sacred to take it away for some unexplainable folly. But I love the way you wrote with such imagery and suspense...It's a dreadful dream, I hope I will never dream. I have enjoyed reading it, Poet Destroey. Thanks for your kind comments. have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Wow! very powerful. Thanks for your comment on my poem Sensitivity. I like your talent and would love for you to read and tell me what you (really) think about my poem The Fortress (part 1 & 2) if you will. I appreciate feedback from talented poets as yourself. Hope you have a great day! Scarlett
Falotico Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Great win and another wonderful write!!!!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations, P D, on your 2nd place win in the Dark Poet Contest sponsored by, SKAT a k a Irma, with this uniquely dark poem.
Brantley Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 9:16 PM
"A little tale about the real me" Oh really?? :) This is great. Best read. I am forced to favorite this one.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Yes P.D. BBF ..two days in Florida with my "honey poo" made me see the light of so many things in our relationship and its all true ..my words... he is too jealous... too insecure ...too possessive... too loving ...too insecure ...too fearful... whats a girl to do but take it with a grain of salt and enjoy life anyway... thats me ...the "Sweetheart" of luv...
Mills Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Very intensely tormentingly dark poem. Well conveyed the dark side where shadows and devils lurk. always, Susan
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 2:28 PM
hey, where is your adam/eve poem? Just waiting to see if you will reveal youself thru that contest. heehe. Anyway, put SOMETHING up!! LUv ya, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Hey P.D. my BBF so appreciate your critique' and encouragement for the contest... I wasn't gonna enter either but at the last minute these words kept rolling around in my head as I rolled around on the sand and I quick jumped up and headed for the laptop... I admit it... I AM ADDICTED TO POETRY and my SUPER SOUP FAMILY...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Shrivastava Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 7:39 AM
This is a winner in the "dark poet's game".... very nice
Lynn Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 6:37 PM
conzrats, gotta love the dark side every now and than, tho i have to say yours is better than mine by far... you rock with love--DDL
R Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Impressive... You really showed off your dark side in this one! Nice writing!
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