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The Dark Place

The brown eye girl remembers it still. It has been years since she had been there but deep in her mind that place is still there. The empty place, the place a lot of people are because they can't get out. The brown eye girl tries to stay in the light the happiness now. But she still remembers being in the lesser place. It took a lot to get out of there. So much of the brown eye girl is still in that place. The place doesn't have anyway out, no doors or window. But somehow the brown eye girl climbed her way out of the dark place.

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Date: 7/29/2023 7:49:00 PM
beautiful penning; may this brown eye girl to escape ? thanks
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