The Dark Place

theres no escape

from this place i learned 2 hate

this black hole in need of a nite lite

2 scatter the shadows compressing my consciousness

into little hard balls of lost moments

time stolen

molten madness peering through my brain

seeking entrance

into

making me feel 

out of
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 18, 2009 at 8:26 PM
An interesting dark piece, love the power line molten maddness peering through my brain Great stuff!
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