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The Dark of Darkest Night

In the dark of darkest night, the demons always start their preying; preying, hidden from the light, on minds of souls whose lives are fraying. Fraying into tattered shreds from games deceitful friends are playing; playing in their weary heads without a care the price they’re paying. Paying with their sanity, these weary souls are ever weighing; weighing inhumanity by demons and the minds they’re slaying. Slaying all their lifelong dreams, destroying hope that leaves them swaying; swaying souls with raveled seams, as demons of the dark are preying. May 9, 2019

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Date: 6/2/2019 2:57:00 PM
John I love the way you've fortmatted the rhyme have never tried this form before, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, I appreciate it. I wanted to try something a little different, glad you liked it. John
Date: 6/2/2019 11:36:00 AM
John, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem ~
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 6/2/2019 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful second placement John. I love when our poems get another chance to shine! xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2019 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/30/2019 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/30/2019 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, you comments and thoughts are appreciated. John
Date: 5/12/2019 2:18:00 PM
Hi John Demons do come in the darkest on night where there is no light - but light will overcome the night! A thought provoking poem and written with intensity! Hugs, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thanks, Jen, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. All my best. John
Date: 5/12/2019 10:06:00 AM
These demons don't sleep...so people wake up... they're closer than you imagine...maybe even in the mirror...All the best John
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 5/10/2019 7:41:00 PM
When hope peeks through demons flee. Where humans pray. Without hope, the demons prey. Great wording in your poem!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/11/2019 6:50:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments, Kim, I like your thoughts on the conflict between humans and demons and praying and preying. All my best. John
Date: 5/9/2019 8:07:00 PM
I can feel the emotional pull within, as this tugs at the heart so deeply. A feeling of Loneliness and Despair. Besides the depth and darkness of this poem. The rhythm and rhyme is sensational. I just love the way these words wrap around each other. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/10/2019 4:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. Thanks always for your support. My best to you. John
Date: 5/9/2019 1:56:00 PM
love the surreal tone of your wonderful work, john... slay them!... huggs
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/9/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, I was trying to channel Poe a bit in this one. Glad you enjoyed it. All the best to you my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 5/9/2019 9:46:00 AM
There's that saying, always keep a light on upstairs in your head, dark thoughts lead to dark deeds. Enjoyed your dark verse John. Tom.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/9/2019 9:52:00 AM
That is sound advice indeed. Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your visit and thoughts. John

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