The Dark Cave

Keeping away fear as my determination
conquers the dark caves wrath,
My braveness is proven to be superstition
as my thoughts are bold.
My footsteps are covered with the oath
to reach the end point old
My ideas experiences growth,
As I learn to move in darkness,
My manhood is no longer a choice
But a taste of braveness
So I can be heard from my voice
As the only witness to move
Through the dark cave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 30, 2009 at 5:49 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Aminkeng. Love, Carol
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