The Dark Angel

i am a Dark Angel-
in an illuminated world
everything is unforgiving
even to a little girl

all the people i see
are a jolly sight
all are laughing happily;
but i am left out in the rainy night

i am a Dark Angel
and i am just a Shadow
struggling with an addiction
and thinking about cremation

all the things i see
as i look about,
everybody avoids me
it makes me just want to shout

all the tears,
all this spilled blood,
remember the past years
when we were young?

i am just a silent Dark Angel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cruz Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 12:47 PM
NErmoso-nya! Really beautifully dark Bekkah keep writing chica! Love, Nemo! ~nya~ ^-^
Chircop Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Welcome to our site,Here you wont be avoided,We are one big family with a desire to write,and enjoy ourselves,Hope you will too--Charma:)
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 3:34 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rebekkah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2009 at 5:09 PM
Delightful dark write Rebekkah, a bright welcome to the Soup >> James
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