The Dark

Do you feel the darkness?
I don't mean dark thoughts or feelings.
The dark, the stillness, the quiet.

When you stand in the black of night, do you feel it?
It starts as a calm, peaceful silence.
You breathe in deep and exhale into nothing.

The anticipation grows inside you.
Is it something? Is it nothing? Is it emptiness?
Then you realize, it's the feeling of being alone...
In the dark.
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September 19, 2026 at 6:26 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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