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The Dancer

Ever since I was just a tiny girl, I have really wished to dance and twirl; at five years old I did ballet, and off the dance floor I would stray; but I sure was pretty when I would whirl. I did lots of falling down and stumbling, and could sure keep the audience laughing; it was clear I had no talent, but I was a spud deviant; so next came jazz- I was great at hopping. I loved it but was never very good, the years have passed and I have left girlhood; along the way I found Hip Hop, and on the stage I still flip-flop; crash, OUCH- never to be my livelihood. ____________________________ February 24, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/The Dancer Copyright Protected, ID 9980-01-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.
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February 28, 2018 at 12:29 AM
I love this Constance ... my first true love and soulmate was a ballerina, (and went to the ABT summer program at one time), so dance has always been a part of my life, (and my mom taught me to Jitterbug as soon as I could walk, and I taught my girls) ... I was never very good, either, but like poetry and the other arts, it's about the joy YOU get from it! Wonderful write - and already a winner, in my opinion! :-) <3
La France Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Greg, thank you for that nice comment, yes doing something we love no matter what makes us winners ~
Swartz Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Your words dance perfectly for you, and less chance for broken bones. This is a great poem good luck in the contest!
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:01 AM
James, thank you, sometimes we just have to do what we love even if not that good at it ~
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February 25, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Enjoyed the fun read..especially the last stanza..best for a win, BW.
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Vijay, thank you for visiting my poem ~
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February 24, 2018 at 7:08 PM
So well-written and entertaining, Constance! Janice
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Janice, thank you for the compliment ~
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February 24, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Maybe not a dancer but a wonderful poet. Good luck in the contest. Tom
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Tom, thank you, actually I am still taking dance classes, because well I love it, even if I will never make a living at it....
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