The Dance On the Mountain Peaks

At Paro of Bhutan I found the clouds
Gathering over the snow white peaks
Over the summit the deep blue shroud
Kept looking on in dazed disbelief

If one takes up my fountain pen
Or snatches my favourite umbrella
Restless naturally are all the grains
Confusion arrives in the sweet tabla

White clouds start fondling the peaks
Drawings of beautiful chaos emerge
Surge of colourfully deep drum beat
Dance in the white peaks go berserk

Rises from the foothills the peace palm
Lifted in the air from a milky white lotus
In the eyes smiling the poems of psalm
Enjoy in peace, ---says a voice sonorous

I quieted my pen and put down the notebook
In bliss kept fixated my blue pacific look
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Tabla : A small drum or pair of drums of India turned to different pitches and played with the hands : In Dictionary.com
May 2, 2016

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Date: 7/2/2016 3:24:00 PM
Great write my friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/3/2016 1:04:00 AM
Thyank you ...
Date: 5/2/2016 5:13:00 PM
well explined view sir.........
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2016 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Mr. Tanwar...
Date: 5/2/2016 1:54:00 PM
YES! I am there with you and have the snap shot and the story. Thank you for allowing me a view through your window. Lovely!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2016 8:27:00 PM
Glad that you shared my window
Date: 5/2/2016 12:59:00 PM
Mr Gupta, Intriguing poem with amazing imagery. Enjoyed every stanza. Ending is also remarkable.............with love.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2016 8:31:00 PM
Yes, Manmath, Thank you. Glad a fresh flower like you liked it... Mere descriptive and educational poems I am not in favour of....
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