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The Dance Of Nature

a large school of fish
in unison each fish turns
    the dance of nature

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Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2025 at 9:58 AM

It's so interesting how they turn that way. Cute one!

Bill Baker

July 16, 2025 at 5:23 PM

I agree, my friend. Quite the show. Bill

Gershon Wolf

July 9, 2025 at 8:59 PM

I find this inspiring --- all the more so because it's so 'natural.' Excelsior, Gershon

Bill Baker

July 16, 2025 at 5:24 PM

It looks effortless, gw. Amazing to me. BB

Mike Gentile

July 9, 2025 at 4:38 AM

Bill, your haiku conjures such beautiful images! I hope you've been well!! Happy Wednesday!

Bill Baker

July 16, 2025 at 5:25 PM

Thanks, Mike; I'm doing well. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 7, 2025 at 11:40 AM

Hello Bill, this is a beautiful poem. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 8, 2025 at 3:43 PM

hello bill, i enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Hilda Greenhough

July 6, 2025 at 7:40 PM

Welcome back. Your haiku is a joy.

Jennifer Proxenos

July 6, 2025 at 9:44 AM

Fascinating - nature can absorb us but Elephants must be watched from a distance. It was on the news, two women in their sixties joined a safari walk in Zambia, and an elephant appeared out of nowhere and gorged them to death. They should have settled for watching fish, intriguing and a lot safer. Hope you and the family are well. Blessings my friend Jennifer.