The Dance Of Nature

a large school of fish in unison each fish turns the dance of nature

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2025 9:58:00 AM

It's so interesting how they turn that way. Cute one!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:23:00 PM

I agree, my friend. Quite the show. Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/9/2025 8:59:00 PM

I find this inspiring --- all the more so because it's so 'natural.' Excelsior, Gershon

Bill Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:24:00 PM

It looks effortless, gw. Amazing to me. BB

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/9/2025 4:38:00 AM

Bill, your haiku conjures such beautiful images! I hope you've been well!! Happy Wednesday!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:25:00 PM

Thanks, Mike; I'm doing well. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/7/2025 11:40:00 AM

Hello Bill, this is a beautiful poem. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2025 3:43:00 PM

hello bill, i enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/6/2025 7:40:00 PM

Welcome back. Your haiku is a joy.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/6/2025 9:44:00 AM

Fascinating - nature can absorb us but Elephants must be watched from a distance. It was on the news, two women in their sixties joined a safari walk in Zambia, and an elephant appeared out of nowhere and gorged them to death. They should have settled for watching fish, intriguing and a lot safer. Hope you and the family are well. Blessings my friend Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/6/2025 5:23:00 AM

Nature is beautiful!