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The Dance of Dances

In early morn, the clouds are light
And breezes dissipate the worries of yesterday
While wispy clouds' dance a fleeting sight
Both camellias and magnolia's limbs sway

Camellias' verdant leaves a sight to see
Against magnolia's beauty pure and white
The two have healing touches in nature's glee
And Larkspurs' colors charm with delight

Magnolia's petals lift in the gentle breeze
Amidst the beauty of nature's grace
A symphony of colors a harmonious tease
In this wondrous heavenly place

Larks sing in the morning light
Where earth and sky meet in unity
Together they dance a wonderous sight
A moment of perfect serenity    

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Sam Kauffman Date: 7/30/2024 11:21:00 AM Sara, your lovely words have captured morning's glorious dance! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings to you. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/30/2024 1:28:00 PM Thank you, Sam, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

thriveni c mysore Date: 7/8/2024 9:41:00 PM Ah! you made Nature dance, lofty thoughts dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/9/2024 12:42:00 PM Why, thank you, Thriveni. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K

David Crandall Date: 7/8/2024 5:33:00 PM Beautiful poem - sounds like paradise! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/9/2024 12:41:00 PM David, Imagination can take us anywhere. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/7/2024 6:32:00 AM So beautiful. I just love this. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/7/2024 9:55:00 AM Thank you, Regina. I am delighted that you loved it. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds Date: 7/7/2024 2:08:00 AM Beautiful poetry Sara, a fabulous Dance of Dances. Congratulations on your win in Miranda’s contest… Beryl Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/7/2024 4:02:00 AM Thank you, Beryl, for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Miranda Hawley Date: 7/6/2024 8:15:00 PM Congratulations on your win in this poem about nature. Nature does contain the Dance of Dances for sure. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/7/2024 4:00:00 AM Thank you, Miranda. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Stopping by with congratulations is thoughtful. Sara K

Valsa George Date: 6/21/2024 9:33:00 PM Magnolia and Camellia.... both are flowers, l love. When they sway and dance in the wind, it will be a beautiful sight. Greatly enjoyed this dance of dances, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/22/2024 3:34:00 AM Thank you, Valsa. Yes, sometimes right at the ending of the season of winter and spring starting up I have both in bloom, but it is very rare as Camellias bloom fall to end of spring and the magnolia begins a little later unless it is Star Magnolia which starts blooming in late winter then Japanese Magnolia usually starts up at nearly spring. Sara K

Duke Beaufort Date: 6/20/2024 5:12:00 PM Sara, nice scene. Very pleasantly portrayed. I just read it again and the comment is consistent! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/21/2024 7:35:00 AM Thank you, Duke. I appreciate you reading it the second time. Sara K

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/14/2024 10:46:00 AM The tranquil serenity permeates every line, Sara. What some may consider a mundane vista -- is pure gold distilled through your talented vision. Huzzah! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/14/2024 1:25:00 PM Thank you, Gershon. Your encouraging words are uplifting today. Sara K

Duke Beaufort Date: 6/13/2024 10:35:00 AM Sara, I'm glad you have the opportunity to share these wonderful scenes. You are a happy poet! It's all appreciated. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/13/2024 12:51:00 PM Why, thank you, Duke. It is nice to read your reviews. Sara K

Ink Empress Date: 6/12/2024 1:30:00 PM Where earth and sky meet in unity! Love that line! You have a way with words dear sara. Brilliant imagery and depth in your words woven so eloquent! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/12/2024 2:27:00 PM Thank you, IE. Your comments are uplifting. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 6/12/2024 4:44:00 AM Dear Sara, How could I not love the serene picture of that early morning garden. The lush imagery and peaceful vibe totally transported me there. I love gardens, and if you are familiar with Longwood Gardens it is one of my favorite places to visit with my wife since it is only 5 miles away. Beautifully done! Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/12/2024 6:26:00 AM Thank you, Daniel for the compliments about my work. I looked up Longwood Gardens and saw some pictures of it. Yes, it would be a wonderful place to visit. There are some places around in Georgia that make a nice day trip, but I am not longer that mobile to be able to visit unless it were a ride through Garden. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

James Marshall Goff Date: 6/12/2024 12:17:00 AM Very healing for me Sara, thanks, jamesy Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/12/2024 4:27:00 AM Thank you, James. I hope all is well with you and yours. I haven't heard from you in a while. Sara K

Silent One Date: 6/11/2024 11:59:00 AM You have a wonderful way of creating imagery, which you have done with lovely words here... Sounds awesome.. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/11/2024 2:15:00 PM Thank you, SO. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/11/2024 10:30:00 AM A wondrous sight indeed, dear. So nice. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/11/2024 10:42:00 AM Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Mark Hughes Date: 6/11/2024 8:19:00 AM Sara, your words paint an idyllic scene, so well done!! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/11/2024 10:42:00 AM Mark, as we all know life here on this earth is not totally idyllic and has its flaws, but there are places or scenes that can seem like heaven on earth. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/11/2024 6:26:00 AM Getting up at first light breeds such joyful poetry. I love sitting in my Dad’s backyard where he has beautiful trees including a magnolia, and when he fills the birdfeeder, so many wonderful birds. I, too, have trees but the birds are often out of sight. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 6/11/2024 10:09:00 AM Thank you, Kim. I am glad that you have two places to enjoy nature at your convenience. Getting out early and enjoying time out there is a very calming experience. Your visits always uplift. Sara K