Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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The Dance of Dances

In early morn, the clouds are light
And breezes dissipate the worries of yesterday
While wispy clouds' dance a fleeting sight
Both camellias and magnolia's limbs sway

Camellias' verdant leaves a sight to see
Against magnolia's beauty pure and white
The two have healing touches in nature's glee
And Larkspurs' colors charm with delight

Magnolia's petals lift in the gentle breeze
Amidst the beauty of nature's grace
A symphony of colors a harmonious tease
In this wondrous heavenly place

Larks sing in the morning light
Where earth and sky meet in unity
Together they dance a wonderous sight
A moment of perfect serenity    

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Sam Kauffman July 30, 2024 at 11:21 AM Sara, your lovely words have captured morning's glorious dance! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings to you. Sara Kendrick July 30, 2024 at 1:28 PM Thank you, Sam, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

thriveni c mysore July 8, 2024 at 9:41 PM Ah! you made Nature dance, lofty thoughts dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing. Sara Kendrick July 9, 2024 at 12:42 PM Why, thank you, Thriveni. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K

David Crandall July 8, 2024 at 5:33 PM Beautiful poem - sounds like paradise! Sara Kendrick July 9, 2024 at 12:41 PM David, Imagination can take us anywhere. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Regina Mcintosh July 7, 2024 at 6:32 AM So beautiful. I just love this. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina Sara Kendrick July 7, 2024 at 9:55 AM Thank you, Regina. I am delighted that you loved it. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds July 7, 2024 at 2:08 AM Beautiful poetry Sara, a fabulous Dance of Dances. Congratulations on your win in Miranda’s contest… Beryl Sara Kendrick July 7, 2024 at 4:02 AM Thank you, Beryl, for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Miranda Hawley July 6, 2024 at 8:15 PM Congratulations on your win in this poem about nature. Nature does contain the Dance of Dances for sure. Sara Kendrick July 7, 2024 at 4:00 AM Thank you, Miranda. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Stopping by with congratulations is thoughtful. Sara K

Valsa George June 21, 2024 at 9:33 PM Magnolia and Camellia.... both are flowers, l love. When they sway and dance in the wind, it will be a beautiful sight. Greatly enjoyed this dance of dances, Sara. Sara Kendrick June 22, 2024 at 3:34 AM Thank you, Valsa. Yes, sometimes right at the ending of the season of winter and spring starting up I have both in bloom, but it is very rare as Camellias bloom fall to end of spring and the magnolia begins a little later unless it is Star Magnolia which starts blooming in late winter then Japanese Magnolia usually starts up at nearly spring. Sara K

Duke Beaufort June 20, 2024 at 5:12 PM Sara, nice scene. Very pleasantly portrayed. I just read it again and the comment is consistent! Sara Kendrick June 21, 2024 at 7:35 AM Thank you, Duke. I appreciate you reading it the second time. Sara K

Gershon Wolf June 14, 2024 at 10:46 AM The tranquil serenity permeates every line, Sara. What some may consider a mundane vista -- is pure gold distilled through your talented vision. Huzzah! ~ Gershon Sara Kendrick June 14, 2024 at 1:25 PM Thank you, Gershon. Your encouraging words are uplifting today. Sara K

Duke Beaufort June 13, 2024 at 10:35 AM Sara, I'm glad you have the opportunity to share these wonderful scenes. You are a happy poet! It's all appreciated. Sara Kendrick June 13, 2024 at 12:51 PM Why, thank you, Duke. It is nice to read your reviews. Sara K

Ink Empress June 12, 2024 at 1:30 PM Where earth and sky meet in unity! Love that line! You have a way with words dear sara. Brilliant imagery and depth in your words woven so eloquent! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light Sara Kendrick June 12, 2024 at 2:27 PM Thank you, IE. Your comments are uplifting. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers June 12, 2024 at 4:44 AM Dear Sara, How could I not love the serene picture of that early morning garden. The lush imagery and peaceful vibe totally transported me there. I love gardens, and if you are familiar with Longwood Gardens it is one of my favorite places to visit with my wife since it is only 5 miles away. Beautifully done! Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Sara Kendrick June 12, 2024 at 6:26 AM Thank you, Daniel for the compliments about my work. I looked up Longwood Gardens and saw some pictures of it. Yes, it would be a wonderful place to visit. There are some places around in Georgia that make a nice day trip, but I am not longer that mobile to be able to visit unless it were a ride through Garden. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

James Marshall Goff June 12, 2024 at 12:17 AM Very healing for me Sara, thanks, jamesy Sara Kendrick June 12, 2024 at 4:27 AM Thank you, James. I hope all is well with you and yours. I haven't heard from you in a while. Sara K

Silent One June 11, 2024 at 11:59 AM You have a wonderful way of creating imagery, which you have done with lovely words here... Sounds awesome.. Sara Kendrick June 11, 2024 at 2:15 PM Thank you, SO. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2024 at 10:30 AM A wondrous sight indeed, dear. So nice. Sara Kendrick June 11, 2024 at 10:42 AM Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Mark Hughes June 11, 2024 at 8:19 AM Sara, your words paint an idyllic scene, so well done!! Sara Kendrick June 11, 2024 at 10:42 AM Mark, as we all know life here on this earth is not totally idyllic and has its flaws, but there are places or scenes that can seem like heaven on earth. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues June 11, 2024 at 6:26 AM Getting up at first light breeds such joyful poetry. I love sitting in my Dad’s backyard where he has beautiful trees including a magnolia, and when he fills the birdfeeder, so many wonderful birds. I, too, have trees but the birds are often out of sight. Sara Kendrick June 11, 2024 at 10:09 AM Thank you, Kim. I am glad that you have two places to enjoy nature at your convenience. Getting out early and enjoying time out there is a very calming experience. Your visits always uplift. Sara K