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In early morn, the clouds are light And breezes dissipate the worries of yesterday While wispy clouds' dance a fleeting sight Both camellias and magnolia's limbs sway Camellias' verdant leaves a sight to see Against magnolia's beauty pure and white The two have healing touches in nature's glee And Larkspurs' colors charm with delight Magnolia's petals lift in the gentle breeze Amidst the beauty of nature's grace A symphony of colors a harmonious tease In this wondrous heavenly place Larks sing in the morning light Where earth and sky meet in unity Together they dance a wonderous sight A moment of perfect serenity

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/30/2024 11:21:00 AM

Sara, your lovely words have captured morning's glorious dance! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings to you.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/30/2024 1:28:00 PM

Thank you, Sam, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/8/2024 9:41:00 PM

Ah! you made Nature dance, lofty thoughts dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2024 12:42:00 PM

Why, thank you, Thriveni. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K

David Crandall

Date: 7/8/2024 5:33:00 PM

Beautiful poem - sounds like paradise!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2024 12:41:00 PM

David, Imagination can take us anywhere. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/7/2024 6:32:00 AM

So beautiful. I just love this. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/7/2024 9:55:00 AM

Thank you, Regina. I am delighted that you loved it. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/7/2024 2:08:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Sara, a fabulous Dance of Dances. Congratulations on your win in Miranda’s contest… Beryl

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/7/2024 4:02:00 AM

Thank you, Beryl, for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Miranda Hawley

Date: 7/6/2024 8:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this poem about nature. Nature does contain the Dance of Dances for sure.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/7/2024 4:00:00 AM

Thank you, Miranda. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Stopping by with congratulations is thoughtful. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 6/21/2024 9:33:00 PM

Magnolia and Camellia.... both are flowers, l love. When they sway and dance in the wind, it will be a beautiful sight. Greatly enjoyed this dance of dances, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/22/2024 3:34:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. Yes, sometimes right at the ending of the season of winter and spring starting up I have both in bloom, but it is very rare as Camellias bloom fall to end of spring and the magnolia begins a little later unless it is Star Magnolia which starts blooming in late winter then Japanese Magnolia usually starts up at nearly spring. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/20/2024 5:12:00 PM

Sara, nice scene. Very pleasantly portrayed. I just read it again and the comment is consistent!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/21/2024 7:35:00 AM

Thank you, Duke. I appreciate you reading it the second time. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2024 10:46:00 AM

The tranquil serenity permeates every line, Sara. What some may consider a mundane vista -- is pure gold distilled through your talented vision. Huzzah! ~ Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/14/2024 1:25:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. Your encouraging words are uplifting today. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/13/2024 10:35:00 AM

Sara, I'm glad you have the opportunity to share these wonderful scenes. You are a happy poet! It's all appreciated.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/13/2024 12:51:00 PM

Why, thank you, Duke. It is nice to read your reviews. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 6/12/2024 1:30:00 PM

Where earth and sky meet in unity! Love that line! You have a way with words dear sara. Brilliant imagery and depth in your words woven so eloquent! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2024 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, IE. Your comments are uplifting. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/12/2024 4:44:00 AM

Dear Sara, How could I not love the serene picture of that early morning garden. The lush imagery and peaceful vibe totally transported me there. I love gardens, and if you are familiar with Longwood Gardens it is one of my favorite places to visit with my wife since it is only 5 miles away. Beautifully done! Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2024 6:26:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel for the compliments about my work. I looked up Longwood Gardens and saw some pictures of it. Yes, it would be a wonderful place to visit. There are some places around in Georgia that make a nice day trip, but I am not longer that mobile to be able to visit unless it were a ride through Garden. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/12/2024 12:17:00 AM

Very healing for me Sara, thanks, jamesy

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2024 4:27:00 AM

Thank you, James. I hope all is well with you and yours. I haven't heard from you in a while. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 6/11/2024 11:59:00 AM

You have a wonderful way of creating imagery, which you have done with lovely words here... Sounds awesome..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2024 2:15:00 PM

Thank you, SO. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2024 10:30:00 AM

A wondrous sight indeed, dear. So nice.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2024 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Mark Hughes

Date: 6/11/2024 8:19:00 AM

Sara, your words paint an idyllic scene, so well done!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2024 10:42:00 AM

Mark, as we all know life here on this earth is not totally idyllic and has its flaws, but there are places or scenes that can seem like heaven on earth. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2024 6:26:00 AM

Getting up at first light breeds such joyful poetry. I love sitting in my Dad’s backyard where he has beautiful trees including a magnolia, and when he fills the birdfeeder, so many wonderful birds. I, too, have trees but the birds are often out of sight.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2024 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I am glad that you have two places to enjoy nature at your convenience. Getting out early and enjoying time out there is a very calming experience. Your visits always uplift. Sara K