The Dance of Anger

Cool form, you have done it superbly. congratulations dear poet friend. Happy writing.

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Delighted to see your poem on the winners' list. Sara K

Excellent Anaya, the dance of anger is an ideal way to release the tension one holds inside, will do next time someone hurts my pride… Beryl

Anger is a natural feeling, but we must control it. There are a few who are angry with me and never repent. I am not like that. I forgive all.

This is so interesting and I love the form you chose. Very creative

Anaya, I do like how you start with a weary waltz. Anger does consume those who experience it and leaves a lot less room for creativity and art. The heater skelter nature that follows reflects that for me. Nothing really works well until we can express our hurt in a positive way and move on. The way you have portrayed this with dance has me moving my body around to see how I feel and to shake loose anything unwanted! TY!!!

We all do the dance of anger sometimes, for whatever reason, what makes us sad, or feeling bad, no one can say it’s a dance never had. A great write Anaya. All the best… Beryl

Your dance shows anger uncontrolled. And it continues so. Very well done. Best for a win.

We all dance to a different drum Anaya, a rush of blood can come from many genres, even love songs, but I’m guessing for the dance of anger you have in mind here no mosh pit is required, it’s all about attitude, I’m not familiar with the Yalto form, so I’ll wish you all the best for contest, cheers David

I enjoyed reading your creative "The Dance of Anger" write with a fun picture. Great Ending.... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Noce poem, Anaya.

Hey Anaya.. Your poem effectively uses the metaphor of a dance to explore themes of emotional exhaustion, disconnection, and the longing for change. The vivid imagery and rhythmic dissonance capture the tension and complexity of the relationship, making the reader feel the strain and yearning for a new beginning. The final lines offer a glimmer of hope, suggesting that breaking free from the old patterns and finding a new rhythm is possible and necessary for emotional renewal.

I love the ambiance of where the dance is performed. It so adds to the feeling. Your off-beat dance of differences and anger, should be a prize winner.