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The Dance Begins

the trees are swaying
             the wind's music is playing
                now, the dance begins


Heidi Sands

6/25/18

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Charles Messina

July 7, 2018 at 6:24 AM

nature's dances can be quite romantic, sometimes (lol) love this haiku, Heidi!

Heidi Sands

July 7, 2018 at 7:29 AM

Yes, they can be, Charles. Thank you :)

Warren Doll

July 6, 2018 at 4:53 PM

Wonderful haiku, Heidi. Well done.

Heidi Sands

July 6, 2018 at 5:01 PM

Thank you Warren :)

Charlie Smith

July 6, 2018 at 11:17 AM

Wonderful Heidi...

Heidi Sands

July 6, 2018 at 3:51 PM

Thank you Charlie :)

Bette Bavington

July 4, 2018 at 4:09 PM

Fantastic thought. They have some great moves. I like it. I hope you have a great fourth of July.

Heidi Sands

July 4, 2018 at 8:39 PM

Thank you Bette. Happy fourth of July :)

Susan Gentry

June 30, 2018 at 2:34 PM

Excellent haiku! :)

Heidi Sands

June 30, 2018 at 10:14 PM

Thank you Susan :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 29, 2018 at 1:46 PM

May I have the honor to have this dance dance with you dearest, Heidi? Marvelous

Heidi Sands

June 29, 2018 at 2:16 PM

So sweet Demetrios. Sounds nice. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Winged Warrior

June 29, 2018 at 10:08 AM

And your poetic dance has begun as well...great haiku Heidi...love & light...^WW^

Heidi Sands

June 29, 2018 at 10:14 AM

Thank you WW. I hope all is well :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

June 28, 2018 at 11:07 AM

dance of nature...great.

Heidi Sands

June 29, 2018 at 10:14 AM

Thank you Rajat :)

Geoffrey Brewer

June 26, 2018 at 11:43 PM

That’s how to write a haiku! Simple an delighting. Well done Heidi

Heidi Sands

June 27, 2018 at 6:37 AM

Thank you very much Geoffrey :)

Mike Gentile

June 26, 2018 at 8:32 AM

This is just a lovely haiku, Heidi very, very nice xxoo happy Tuesday

Heidi Sands

June 26, 2018 at 11:35 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Tuesday :)

Silent One

June 26, 2018 at 4:22 AM

Great haiku Heidi..

Heidi Sands

June 26, 2018 at 6:41 AM

Thank you Silent One :)

Lyric Man

June 25, 2018 at 10:21 PM

Heidi.. take my hand! Let's make it a duet...

Heidi Sands

June 26, 2018 at 6:40 AM

Thank you Lyric Man :)

Arturo Michael

June 25, 2018 at 8:08 PM

The dance of life...Nice Haiku...All the best Heidi

Heidi Sands

June 25, 2018 at 8:09 PM

Thank you Arturo :)

Vijay Pandit

June 25, 2018 at 4:55 PM

Beautiful poem--enjoy the dance, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

June 25, 2018 at 6:34 PM

Thank you Vijay! Happy to see your comment :)

Robertina B.

June 25, 2018 at 4:37 PM

A fabulous haiku, Heidi.. Enjoyed it! Warmest wishes..

Heidi Sands

June 25, 2018 at 6:34 PM

Thank you Robertina! I hope all is well :)

Joseph May

June 25, 2018 at 3:40 PM

A dance among the leaves..Wonderful write Heidi..

Heidi Sands

June 25, 2018 at 3:59 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

The Dance Begins

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