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The Dance Begins

the trees are swaying the wind's music is playing now, the dance begins Heidi Sands 6/25/18

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Charles Messina

Date: 7/7/2018 6:24:00 AM

nature's dances can be quite romantic, sometimes (lol) love this haiku, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2018 7:29:00 AM

Yes, they can be, Charles. Thank you :)

Warren Doll

Date: 7/6/2018 4:53:00 PM

Wonderful haiku, Heidi. Well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/6/2018 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Warren :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/6/2018 11:17:00 AM

Wonderful Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/6/2018 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Charlie :)

Bette Bavington

Date: 7/4/2018 4:09:00 PM

Fantastic thought. They have some great moves. I like it. I hope you have a great fourth of July.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2018 8:39:00 PM

Thank you Bette. Happy fourth of July :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/30/2018 2:34:00 PM

Excellent haiku! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2018 10:14:00 PM

Thank you Susan :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/29/2018 1:46:00 PM

May I have the honor to have this dance dance with you dearest, Heidi? Marvelous

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2018 2:16:00 PM

So sweet Demetrios. Sounds nice. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/29/2018 10:08:00 AM

And your poetic dance has begun as well...great haiku Heidi...love & light...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2018 10:14:00 AM

Thank you WW. I hope all is well :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 6/28/2018 11:07:00 AM

dance of nature...great.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2018 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Rajat :)

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 6/26/2018 11:43:00 PM

That’s how to write a haiku! Simple an delighting. Well done Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2018 6:37:00 AM

Thank you very much Geoffrey :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/26/2018 8:32:00 AM

This is just a lovely haiku, Heidi very, very nice xxoo happy Tuesday

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2018 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Tuesday :)

Silent One

Date: 6/26/2018 4:22:00 AM

Great haiku Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2018 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Silent One :)

Lyric Man

Date: 6/25/2018 10:21:00 PM

Heidi.. take my hand! Let's make it a duet...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2018 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Lyric Man :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/25/2018 8:08:00 PM

The dance of life...Nice Haiku...All the best Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 8:09:00 PM

Thank you Arturo :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2018 4:55:00 PM

Beautiful poem--enjoy the dance, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 6:34:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! Happy to see your comment :)

Robertina B.

Date: 6/25/2018 4:37:00 PM

A fabulous haiku, Heidi.. Enjoyed it! Warmest wishes..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 6:34:00 PM

Thank you Robertina! I hope all is well :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2018 3:40:00 PM

A dance among the leaves..Wonderful write Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)