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The Dance

Mi cielo it seems I cannot have you nor leave you between this not having you or the leaving I fail to comprehend my reason for loving you somehow I know all the while why I should forget you... You do not wish to alter your deceptive ways or cease seeking me so I will alter my heart so that half of it will now abhor you while half remains to adore you... Since we're bound in passion let us find a happy medium all this anguish is non-productive so let us diminish this behavior of jealousy and mistrust... For one who only offers half of themselves should not demand all from the other and remember this mi amor while you are dancing of deceit know that my dance will reflect yours... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Date: 3/26/2014 5:18:00 PM
this is a very fitting title, since it seems the other half is dancing around the topic of real love. A very interesting theme you covered. But maybe if you go ahead and give your all, it will inspire your partner to do the same!! This is so different from the new Johnny Legend song I have recently been hearing: I give you all of me. Have you heard it?
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..I haven't heard the song but I will give it a listen..
Date: 3/21/2014 1:45:00 PM
very beautifully penned ken excellent piece dear friend
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/21/2014 8:33:00 PM
Liam thank you old friend!

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