The Dance

The man in Berlin loves to dance
By the mist of the soft evening moon;
He takes his time to step on the rhyme
But he never found the tune.
There's a street where nobody goes
Where sad echoes bounce off the walls;
Where shadows march to the drum of woes
And crawl fast down the lonely halls.

You know dear I want you, I do
I need to lie down with you soon;
When the leaves on the tree are just a few
Come to me when love howls a tune.
There's a slice torn out of the sky
Day is scented with lilies of snow;
And weary birds find it hard to fly
They are scattered with no where to go.

There's a music hall in Berlin
Where the notes play loud to reviews;
There's a bar where no one is talking
They're condemned to death by the blues.
When will they look at your picture
And see the lost lonely years?
Come hold me my darling and dance
To the music of fantastic tears.

I'll dance with you in Berlin
I'll be dressed in laughter’s disguise;
With red roses between my breasts
And my hand caressing your thighs.
I'll yield to your aura of beauty
And see what you've got chained to tomorrow;
It will never be just a duty
To love you without all my sorrow.



This needs a bit of explanation; it has to do with
the second world war, the echoes are the haunting
past that brought the war about, and the shadows
are soldiers involved in the war. The rest is about 
the elusive happiness that could not be found.   


For Chris Aechtner's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Very atmospheric! As always your phrasing is sharp and penetrating... '...sad echoes bounce off the walls,' '...there's a slice torn out of the sky,' '...scattered with nowhere to go,' and my favourites, '...condemned to death by the blue.' and'...the music of fantastic tears.' A wonderful composition! Nicely rhymed with a rolling flow. :)
Whitehead Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 12:40 PM
This is really a good poem Elizabeth. I enjoyed reading it also. Well done.
Cooper Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 8:48 PM
wow this is a great poem I so enjoyed reading this. thank you for sharing
K. Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Wow, what an amazing and romantic read, Elizabeth! Really enjoyed this and super congrats to you! Thanks for dropping by my poems with your kind words! :D
Devnath  Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Congratulation my friend on your grand win and wish you and all yours 'a Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl
Arno Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
Horsman Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:38 PM
congrats lizzie, this is awesome, it say so much about you, so intriguing, just love it. harry
Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:35 PM
lots of things to ponder and I'd add more verse rather than the footnote so you are sure the reader gets the important info ;) Congrad's Light & Love
Williams Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Lizzy congrats on your stunning win for a memorable poem, have a great Christmas holiday..David
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Chris' contest Elizabeth. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Truley lovely congratulations
Green Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 6:36 PM
so wonderful,,,great poem...
Minardi Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 7:44 AM
Wow, thanks for the explanation. It helps us to know what you meant in this poem. Such a great and deep writing :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 11:18 PM
Utterly beautiful one, Elizabeth!
Effendi Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 11:15 AM
This is a really nice one by the way, luv, Hussain
Effendi Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Hmmm! Whats in your mind, haan????
Deane Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 5:26 AM
I read your blog this morning and shocked myself...I can't believe all this time I have missed your poetry...this is beautifully written...luv shannon
Poet Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 6:17 PM
Another gem from Elizabeth.Enjoyed.
Maverick Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 11:18 PM
A very free spirited poem from you Lizzie:) great to read today.. I am quite busy at the moment and may find it hard to comment, however i check whenever i can and always try to get back to comments..!
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November 23, 2011 at 8:51 PM
if you only knew. nobody expected me to know how to danced. but my thirties were something else. and i feel so good i know that i could bring thoes days back. but i better be carefull befor i through something out. john
Freeman Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Quite unusual and beautiful verse dear... From within the soul is what poetry is all about. A bit of mystery in it also, makes for an interesting read, dear poet. Thanks for your kind comment on my verse, yes it is something that is getting more prominant daily lately. Thanks for your heartfelt kindness of comment. Agape, Moses
Goudreau Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 6:21 PM
What a beautiful masterpiece you've created here Elizabeth. A moving and very heartfelt write yet delivered so perfectly in verses, rhymes, rhythm, diction. Sentimental and very visual. A fine piece of art I would say! As well I also want to thank you dearly for your comments on mine. You are a sweetheart! Million thx for sharing And May God Bless!
Cooke Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Berlin was a legend pre war. Marlena Dietrich was at home here, and yes this is hot stuff, tinged with deep sadness. The war changed a lot of things. Could make a film about this poem. Sometimes one feels we were born too late. Steven
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November 23, 2011 at 4:29 PM
I also love this poem Elizabeth, it dances in beauty and I can hear the music as so many visuals come flying into one's head. XX Lizzie T
Sivey Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 3:04 PM
What a flow this awesome write has Lizzy! I have read several of your poems but none were as unique as this one is! I love your reference to Berlin, is it true that they are further along in the arts? Awesome Work!!
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