The Dance

Candles lit crooked flames breeze enticing Tradition rich climbs eerily naked inviting High heels and spirals, seashells and stars Legs twined with ideal stain tinged wisdom.

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Russell Sivey

Date: 9/4/2011 12:52:00 PM

I'm glad I read this poem as it is truly a fantastic poem...such imagery through almost perfect descriptions! Thank you for giving me a chance to read this great write!!

Don Johnson

Date: 9/4/2011 6:00:00 AM

candles of the crooked flame, high heels an spirals came, poem is good, glad i came , jonno's left the building:)

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/4/2011 1:11:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* “I Have This Image of A Lighthouse or Cottage or Worship By The Sea & Its Roots Cross Perhaps Centuries Upon Centuries & There Are These Grotesque Looking Spirits That *^_^* Used to Be Beautiful Angels Looking On While As Drooling All Over Themselves *^_^* Wait, I'm Getting Another Vision *^_#* Just Having Fun Sweet Nancy &, Kool Poe My Dear!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Always & Forever, Jasper *