The Dance

Walking among others
physically I'm there.
My mind suspended in the clouds,
mentally unaware.
My eyes glazed over
with a crimson color gloss.
My reaction speed slower,
this mind of mine seems lost.

Mixed with the many shades of life
different ages, young and old.
Strolling downtown fifth avenue,
smoking a blunt that I had rolled
Nobody seemed to notice
my cannabis aroma, 
concentrated in my lungs,
relaxed in my walking coma.

I notice the petite young shorty
just up the walk a ways.
My looking stimulates a smile,
I approach slow and with a sway.
My name is, you are?
Extending my right hand.
She was hesitant at first,
like I might have a deeper plan.

She was five foot nine, slim
with chestnut colored hair.
Hazel eyes, immaculate curves
I find it hard not to stare.
I ask her " Do you dance?"
" I do " she retorts.
I took her to the salsa club
with a strict dress code, of course.
Throughout the night we danced,
sweat a free flowing river.
Thrusting her hips, bent forward.
I felt my legs begin to quiver.

The D.J. slowed his tempo
to Spanish R&B
I pulled her close, our pace had slowed.
Moves simultaneous to the beat.
Time drew swiftly,
Close to closing time.
It was now almost two,
About time to say good-bye.
She asked me for my number,
as she hands me hers.
Exchanging promises of another date,
and another chance for me to flirt...


Jared Pickett......9/01/09
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 5, 2009 at 10:36 PM
awesome write Jared! :)
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September 5, 2009 at 6:53 AM
sweet write--charma
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September 5, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Jared, my first read of the day and what a super start, nice piece sir>>James
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September 2, 2009 at 11:18 AM
I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jared.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol
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September 1, 2009 at 10:16 PM
Oh... I like your writing. MoonBee
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September 1, 2009 at 5:57 PM
This was enjoyable.....felt like I was there watching the flirtataion!! ~ nicely done:) ~ Carrie
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