Deb Wilson Poet Rhyme

The Damage Done

Her little world shattered
Dollies made of paper
Heart and soul tattered
Feelings turned to vapor

A life now a wreck
Brings innocence lost
With love not a speck
Just hatred the cost

Alone on a sea
Of guilt-laden woe
No longer carefree
It won't let her go

Damaged goods here
Childhood's been taken
Forcing out a numb tear
She just feels forsaken

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Robert Pettit January 16, 2011 at 9:48 AM Another fine work. You are a very impressive writer.

Jimmy Anderson January 11, 2011 at 6:52 PM Very nice poem heartfelt...Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire January 11, 2011 at 9:43 AM Deb, it sounds like you are describing a child whose "innocense" was compromised by abuse. Surely, such a child will never again life carefree and carry undeserved feelings of guild with her forever. Such a heartfelt poem. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 11, 2011 at 6:07 AM Feelings turned to vapor.. Deb a powerful and intense emotional poem u have penned today and such depth to every line urging the reader to read on ... repairing a life is never easy but possible my friend.. enjoyed with luv..