The Dam

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" NATURE " MY PHOTO, ©

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There was once a species really dam That his brain didn't weigh more than a gram Wishing his life to enjoy His planet came to destroy Thus nature did rule to expel the bum! © Demetrios Trifiatis 16 December 2021

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/16/2021 8:33:00 AM

Haha good one Demetrios, I'd like to add some haven't even got a brain by the way they act lol. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/17/2021 12:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, my friend, Tom. God be with you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/16/2021 6:34:00 AM

You have crafted a fantastic Limerick, my dear friend Demetrios. And those dammed species want to enjoy life no matter the state of our earth is. Your words have given me a great deal of food for thought.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/17/2021 12:40:00 AM

God bless you for your kind words, my friend, Lasaad. Thank you!