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Based this off Dr. Waffles song from tiktok the axolotl song or the axolotl on the pink stairs.

The Daffodil Song

?? The Daffodil Song (Based on the Axolotl Song)

(Verse 1)
There's a Daffodil on the hillside, green.
Is a daffodil supposed to be, seen?
If you ask the Creator,
If the spring will come later,
A sparrow flits by and then the flower's gone.

(Verse 2)
There's a Daffodil in a window box, bright.
Is a daffodil supposed to be, there at night?
If you ask the Almighty,
If the flower's doing rightly,
A bumblebee buzzes in and then the flower's gone.

(Verse 3)
There's a Daffodil at the front, gate.
Is that a sign of God's love or just fate?
If you ask the Spirit,
If they'll always be near it,
A warm breeze blows through and then the flower's gone.

(Chorus)
Yellow, mellow, Daffodil!
Hallowed, hallowed, God's love still!
We'll see them, tomorrow! (Yay, yeah, yeah!)
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 2:33 PM
what an upbeat poem with such a smooth cadence and message. I especially liked Yellow, mellow, Daffodil! Hallowed, hallowed, God's love still! well penned
Patterson Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Thank you my nephew sent the axealottl song to me and now I can't get it out of my head, lol I had to change the lyrics before I drove myself crazy.
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