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The Cymbal Crush

she jumps in his mind like a sudden cymbal clank she's a crush, of love Feb 6, 2019 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin " a valentine senryu"

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/11/2019 8:35:00 AM

Such great action words Pixie Dust. Excellent pen

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2019 5:18:00 PM

a sweet poem Pixie many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/7/2019 4:10:00 PM

Pixie,have a Happy Valentine's Day.. back with congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2019 12:58:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/7/2019 8:27:00 AM

Hi Pixie , I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/7/2019 5:08:00 AM

Love the imagery in your witty senryu, congratulations on your winning placement!

Bette Bavington

Date: 2/6/2019 1:37:00 PM

I can honestly say I had never thought about it this way. It gave me something to think about. Nicely done.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/6/2019 12:49:00 PM

Good senyru, my friend ... Good luck in the contest...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/6/2019 6:06:00 AM

I just clanked a cymbal about two seconds ago, and yes people do jump in and out of our minds with a quickness only known to thought and cymbal clanks. Nice one!