The Cymbal Crush

she jumps in his mind 
like a sudden cymbal clank 
she's a crush, of love


Feb 6, 2019

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 

" a valentine senryu"
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Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Such great action words Pixie Dust. Excellent pen
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 5:18 PM
a sweet poem Pixie many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Pixie,have a Happy Valentine's Day.. back with congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:58 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Hi Pixie , I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:08 AM
Love the imagery in your witty senryu, congratulations on your winning placement!
Bavington  Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 1:37 PM
I can honestly say I had never thought about it this way. It gave me something to think about. Nicely done.
Roper Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Good senyru, my friend ... Good luck in the contest...
Krutsinger Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 6:06 AM
I just clanked a cymbal about two seconds ago, and yes people do jump in and out of our minds with a quickness only known to thought and cymbal clanks. Nice one!
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