The curse of clarity

Mountain, wind, freedom
River, water, clarity 
Dessert, sand, anger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 6/25/2024 5:47:00 AM
Yeah, I'd be angry too if stuck in a hot desert. Nice haiku. Welcome to PS!
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Date: 6/25/2024 4:58:00 AM
My first try at haiku
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