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The Curl is Closing

The Curl is Closing – Visual 1 6/9/2015 The curl is closing overhead, I press to move the board along. The shark is closing to my dread. The curl is closing overhead, maybe the shark has just been fed, must not wipe out I could be wrong. The curl is closing overhead, I press to move the board along

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Date: 6/9/2015 6:07:00 PM
oh this one is a story of peril. Nice edge for a triolet. I enjoyed this.
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Franklin Price
Date: 6/9/2015 9:46:00 PM
Andrea, Thanks for seeing the suspense and danger and the triolet form not long enough to finish the story. It's for each reader as they see fit. It was fun to write. Thanks for visiting