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The Crush

While climbing mountains I breathe deeply an eternity of sky Fastly beats the uneven hammer of my heart under multi-layered coats of pain My fingers clamour for a more solid grip as I slip from the safety of my line into the grey of your eyes Arms flailing the vertigo swallows me as I fall hopelessly into your soul I cringe waiting for the impact of jagged rocks and the inevitable crush of my bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/15/2009 9:21:00 AM
He will catch you. Excellent write. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2009 2:27:00 PM
New song about honey I'm fallin in love with you could come from this one. Sara
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