The Cruise

I took a cruise with a boat full of strangers
but I could not mingle much.
I wanted to watch the wide open sea.
Some passed me by saying : Hi;
I would nod smiling, glad to have taken note of them,
but then I returned to my watching.

Hour after hour, by day and star-lit night
I found myself sailing upon the waves.
The ocean was often wild, sometimes calm
and with every great surge or gentle ripple
I responded emotionally until
all highs and lows
became one oceanic mind.

In that restless expanse
I recognized my own flowing
and innate life,
something worth the sailing upon
as it forged a path over the ever changing
toward a still and pacific harbor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:12 PM
The ocean can do that! Loved the write!
Ashford Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Thank you Kim. 'The Cruise' is of course a metaphor for the journey of a life a life that is ever changing and yet in the end we find that we are really the stillness in all this movement eventually we find that peaceful harbor (pacific). Cheers!
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