The Crown

Blood dripped down from his crown leaving us with his word Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues Contest Name: Heavenly Monoku Date Created: 01/24/2019

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/24/2019 7:22:00 PM

Hi Bobby, this is an excellent Monoku my friend. Love the content of the piece. So few words that give a powerful message. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Reads like a winner. Have a wonderful Friday....Mike.

Bobby May
Date: 1/24/2019 7:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Mike!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/24/2019 6:00:00 PM

WoW! Bobby, You hit this challenge out of the ball park. Good content and imagery. I can imagine the crown of thorns on his head. I looks like a winner to me. Well done:-) Alexis

Bobby May
Date: 1/24/2019 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Alexis!!

Constance La France

Date: 1/24/2019 3:29:00 PM

Bobby, what an amazing monoku... it really touched my heart ~

Bobby May
Date: 1/24/2019 4:54:00 PM

Thank you my friend