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The Crossing Over

crossing over… her chilled breath caressed my cheeks no reddening here just a darker ebony hue the color collage of foliage canvassed my eyes falling rainbow tears dripping to nourish mother earth matting her joseph’s coat reflected by scattered rays peeping through shuttered skies the bridge over the river of change is indeed a delightful crossing

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Date: 12/2/2024 9:00:00 PM
I really liked the metaphors. From my perception, the poem describes the journey over the bridge and gives me plenty of unspoken insight into what lies beyond the bridge and underneath. I believe one would much rather choose the bridge to travel on.
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/7/2025 6:33:00 PM
Many thanks, Mary. One. Peace and Love.

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