The Crossing Over

crossing over…

her chilled breath
caressed my cheeks

no reddening here
just a darker ebony hue

the color collage 
of  foliage

canvassed my eyes
falling rainbow tears

dripping to nourish
mother earth

matting
her joseph’s coat

reflected by scattered rays
peeping through shuttered  skies

the bridge over the river of change
is indeed a delightful crossing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nakoneczny Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 9:00 PM
I really liked the metaphors. From my perception, the poem describes the journey over the bridge and gives me plenty of unspoken insight into what lies beyond the bridge and underneath. I believe one would much rather choose the bridge to travel on.
Lowe Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Many thanks, Mary. One. Peace and Love.
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