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Into Cool Wetness A Fortiori Abounds Greater Than Instinct A Fortiori - for a stronger more certain reason.-- © Apr 30 For Raul’s “Primal Instinct” contest

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Date: 5/4/2010 9:37:00 PM
After reading your poem, I'm reminded of a show on animal planet which documented a lioness which would "steal" the newborn calf from its dam, and instead of killing the calf, the lioness would want to mother the calf, and pal around with the calf. Of course, lioness had no milk, and eventually the calf would die from starvation. The filmers documented approx. 6-8 calves, and one lasted something like 14 days. Reason was not understood.
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Date: 5/4/2010 9:32:00 PM
I missed this photo. It sounds as if there was a wild animal in the photo. "Fortiori" is a very interesting word. I'm now wondering what the strong reason the animal was lurking or peering.
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Date: 5/4/2010 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest "Primal Instinct" Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:32:00 PM
Charles, congratulations on your success in my Primal Instinct contest...Raul
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:22:00 PM
Interesting thoughts on the picture. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:06:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's Primal Instinct contest Charles. Love,Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 8:47:00 AM
VERY nice (now that I know that word!!) Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/29/2010 11:01:00 PM
Well done, Charles. I think you captured the essence of the picture as I saw it. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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