The Cross

The young man worked quietly
His Dad had been away,
But he was full of emotion
His Dad would return today.

He had carved the wood with perfection
His Dad would be so pleased,
His Mom helped him gather daisies
In the warm September breeze.

The limousine pulled in the drive
The boy saluted the men,
They handed him his country's flag
He felt his heart would never mend.

The velvet box passed to his Mom
As they bowed their heads to pray,
Thankyou for our soldiers
At home, and far away.

That young boy is a man today
And he still feels his loss,
As he watches his son pick daisies
To lay beneath the cross.


Lynn Barany
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hill Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 6:07 PM
it's somthing i'll think about for awhile and read over and over again
Hanna Barany Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Hi Jodi, Thanks for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it. Cheers, Lynn Barany
Eastman Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 2:07 PM
So sad and still so touching. You are a master at this craft.
Jackson Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 11:39 AM
My Lynn, how I haven't 'crossed' this poem before has annoyed me a little :-( this is such a sad but beautifully written poem. You are and always will be my favourite poet! You inspire me in ways no other have, this one is amazing, well done again. xoxox
Hanna Barany Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:19 PM
My man Ryan, thanks so much....you certainly are one of my highest inspirations. Lynn
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