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The Critics

The Critics This poem begins with a short story Once upon a time in a land and time far, far away People would listen to music Read Novels Read Poetry Watch movies Look at art And decide for themselves Whether or not it looked good Sounded good Kept them entertained Or touched their soul These people knew beyond doubt When they were moved And often moved to tears Moved to smiles Moved to silence All this happened Once upon a time in a land and time far, far away Then one day The Critics came Deciding that they new better Than everyone else So they formulated their opinions Joined their clubs And backed each other up They stole our appreciation Convinced us With complex hyper intellectualism With clever explanations Of artistic social statements They took away the art And made it feed their world They took away the art And made it feed their ego They took away our art And told us that we the populace Just didn’t have a clue It’s always seemed strange to me That a critics talent propensity Is to criticize Do they stand there with a brush And pour out the colours of their heart Do they ache on the tip of a pen Trying to capture burning lines Written in their souls Do they have the talent to produce the music Do they even know what a muse is Do they produce anything of note Anything which “we” may consider worthy Of taking note It’s the strange talent-less world of The Critic They wish that they could do it But they know they can’t So instead they just steal it And try to tell us they know what art is But we know they don’t These people will use our indignation To get the worlds attention To make us listen to their opinions Of our own creations They will sequester our right to see Any beauty that we see And sell it for the price And do it for the money

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/10/2009 8:24:00 AM
dude you are a genuis real raw honest true classic my friend funny i believe i know a few people who fall into this catagory great piece my friend
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Date: 6/10/2009 8:23:00 AM
dude you are a genuis real raw honest true classic my friend funny i believe i know a few people who fall into this catagory great piece my friend
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Date: 5/20/2009 9:35:00 AM
Dear Colin: How very well put! Direct and to the point, and the intended should see himself clearly! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 5/11/2009 12:51:00 PM
It's so unfair and quite strange really. How did this all happen anyway? Thought provoking and confusing as to who exactly created such a thing called 'Critic'? Bizarre. Excellent! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 5:43:00 AM
Well, you said it all..wordless, talent-less critics..LOL..that speaks a mouthful....I have always believe that no matter the poem or the subject matter one can always find the artistic moment in the piece and comment on that..you don't have to like the subject matter..just comment on the artistic quality of the write..
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:15:00 PM
excellent--charma
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:09:00 PM
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:08:00 PM
Well said, Colin! Indeed, the value of a poem should be measured by the impact it has on each individual reader, just as all art forms are judged. Awesome writing. You have a Soup army standing behind you. Love, Carolyn
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