The Cries of Adonis-W

I, Adonis, born out of an incest of father-daughter
Semitic god, a hunter and a handsome man
A god of vegetation, women’s laments “Adoniscries”
Festivals on me in spring, mourning in autumn.

Spending six months with favorite Aphrodite,
The Goddess of love, beauty and sexual pleasure
Born out of the churning and foaming of
Severed genitals thrown into the ocean
Loved by many of the gods and mortals
But luckily I am her most favored one

Spending six months with ill favored Persephone
Queen of the dead, and the underworld,
Pomegranate in hand, the goddess of harvest 
Father promising her in marriage with his brother
Over-aged Goddess seduced me in under-age.

I have heard about “the Adonis Complex”
The main concern today of one’s body image
A modern problem striking men of all age
Ye, mortals! On the earth you have our replicas
Adonises, Zeuses, Aphrodites and Persephones
I’m not a god like Christ, Lord Krishna or Allah.

Lead me kindly not to undeserved godliness
Plead me not for my polygamy and incest
Forbid don’t forget, you masters of words
Bid me well with your thoughtful muse.
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First Place Winner in
CONTEST :"GLORY 'gods' (MEN ONLY ENTRIES) of Linda-Marie
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Brown Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Glory gods (For Men Only)". Love, Carol
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August 10, 2010 at 1:12 AM
I sure learned a lot from this write of yours Dr. Ram! Super congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)
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August 7, 2010 at 10:15 PM
You have displayed your vast knowledge on gods, Dr. Ram and congratulations on your first win on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Emerald Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:31 PM
I found the winners and you deserve the top spot...congrats
Mehta Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:18 PM
Thanks Linda for my first placement in your contest. Congratulations to all the winners
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August 6, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram.. u are my first place winner in the GLORY 'gods' contest.. a wonderful expressive write deserving of first place... please soup mail me your mailing address to receive your fifty dollar visa gift card.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. happy weekend...with luv..
Anish Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Fine classical allusions in your work. We all face the difficulty of mortality. Keep up the fine work! Yours Matthew Anish
La France Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much for your comment on my poetry ~ I think this poem is very good and it should do well in the contest ~
Cantu Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 12:52 PM
I love mythology poetry! Mr. Adonis is a quite a figure, his stories are damn funny, somehow. I still can't picture such arrogance and egonamiatry. Thanks for sharing.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:02 PM
well, this is really good , Dr. Ram. I am thinking I want to do Aphrodite. she is certainly the most interesting of the goddesses by far!! Fair Adonis, a great one to write on! Luv, Andrea
Bracken Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Dr. Ram, This is an excellent write. Your imagery is excellent. Your facts are very true. Your poem is a story within a poem. I know you will do well in the contest. Best of luck. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, Shirley
Neels Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Fabulous write on this god, Dr Ram.. All the best for the contest -- Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Interesting thoughts you have penned about Greek Mythology and Gods..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and my blog...Sara
Conway Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 7:43 PM
Fantastic write Dr. Ram, Adonis is one of my favorites-I wish you luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
Farlouis Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Excellent verse! Very interesting read with a strong message. Thanks for sharing.
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