The Creature

Deep in the Tennessee mountains
Lives a creature the people fear
It only comes out to celebrate
And to feed just twice a year

Covered in hair from head to toe
And a stench that was never defined
A reward went out to capture this beast
But all who would declined

Some called it sasquatch but they were wrong
For only a few of us knew the truth
My wife had seen it her entire life
And told the stories of her tearful youth

You'd know the fear I speak of
If only once you ever saw
This hideous beast that walks the earth
I call it my mother- in- law
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 19, 2010 at 2:05 PM
THAT ONE IS GOOD , FOR A MINUTE THIER YOU HAD ME GOING THINKING IT WAS MY HUSBAND...WHAT A NICE ENDING ..THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT ON ...MY ENCOUNTERS....IRMA
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February 19, 2010 at 4:14 AM
funny!! thanks for your comments today, they are encouraging to me.
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February 18, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Oh, you really had me going, Larry! You built suspense so well that I couldn't wait to find out what the "creature" was! Then, of course, the punch line produced a hearty laugh. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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