The Creator

Thou 
unseen 
Supernatural 
force, 
Sweeping 
thru 
the 
Universe 
like 
raging 
Storm...blessing 
some 
And 
cursing 
others.
Some 
in 
thy 
Omnipresence 
do 
believe.
Some 
represent 
thou 
With 
images,others 
say 
Thou 
art 
non-
existent.
Can 
one 
hold 
the 
air 
with 
His 
hands?
Does 
one 
behold 
love 
to 
Fall 
in 
love?
How 
were 
we 
formed?
How 
does 
a 
foetus 
float 
Un-
sinkingly?
Why 
do 
some 
kick 
the 
Bucket 
too 
soon,others 
Lately?
What 
keeps 
us 
breathing 
And 
alive?
Some 
have 
hearts 
of 
Stone,others 
fragile 
Hearts 
like 
eggs.
All 
these 
from 
the 
same 
source?
If 
this 
omnipresent 
force 
Is 
a 
pusar,what 
do 
we 
Believe 
in?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
Dear Bob, How very much YOU cause the mind to Roam in the Spiritual Realm Very Prominent Quill. Superbly Written I have a meeting to go to I will comment more later this afternoon LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege... HG
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