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The Creative Writing Class

I am sitting in the circle; Listening to the others, The stories they are telling Of some childhood memory. The rain outside is falling, Tapping gently on the window. Inside the cakes are waiting. And the woman’s making tea. The tinkling of the china Mixes with the chatter And the sound of happy laughter From the voices that are free. Now we’re looking to the teacher For the next name he is calling, When suddenly I realise- The name belongs to me. I am sitting in the circle, The others they are listening. I feel the ears and eyes That wait for me to start. The rain it still is falling And the woman’s in the kitchen, But all that I can hear is the BEATING, BEATING,heavy BEATING of my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/18/2018 2:09:00 AM
I think you captured the anxiety of public speaking, particularly opening up about creative work, very well. I have always been nervous before reading out in poetry groups for the first time. I have felt that nobody will like the pieces or won't understand them.
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:23:00 PM
The truth shines through in this poem with every ounce of her being. Nice!
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Date: 7/4/2018 3:47:00 AM
The poem captures the anxiety during such situations
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:29:00 PM
You've captured the moment, that feeling of dread when it's our turn (OH NO!), so perfectly. This is terrific, Sylvia. It's a FAVE for me. Best always, Gershon
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Date: 7/1/2018 6:13:00 PM
Hello Sylvia, nice to meet you. You could not speak because you were scared. I can not do poem in a small crowd because I am scared I have tried several times and nothing comes out of me. This is normal. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 7/1/2018 11:37:00 AM
written with much empathy... expressive work, sylvia... huggs
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