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* double etheree *

The Creaking Swing

The moon hardly pierces the winter clouds. Afar, a solitary wolf howls. The girl sits on the Glum-Glade swing. The pain of her claws growing and the frost made her wince. Still one rocking and she will become the raven ready to fly and spread the seeds of malediction. Cursed are those who have discovered her secret. It is dangerous to spy on a sorceress in the woods. Afar, a solitary wolf dies. And the moon weeps behind the frigid fog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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July 21, 2026 at 10:36 AM
“seeds of malediction” There’s something about that phrase that brings this entire poem together.
Ormulyce Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 9:21 PM
Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment.
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Intriguing piece. Trembles with fear and foreboding. Thanks, Gershon
Ormulyce Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so much. Glad you liked this piece
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Real interesting! Great subject matter for a double etheree!
Ormulyce Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Thank you so much.
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