The Cracks Within

At times the cracks within our souls Are placed there for a simple reason Our lives possess certain goals Just assuredly as each of the seasons So we can find the one who seals the cracks Who molds us back into an unembellished form To be there for us picking up what we lack Becoming our thunder in every brainstorm That one person who completes us The light that shines in our night skies The one who gives us undying love When our soul cries the one that replies To finish each of our incomplete sentences There for us when we become defective Knowing each of our own preferences Even to know what is our perspective

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Date: 7/6/2021 5:02:00 AM
That one person who completes us Beautiful.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/11/2021 11:22:00 PM
Thank you:)
Date: 6/14/2021 8:32:00 PM
WoW! Brenda, If one finds a person like you so skillfully described, hold on to them. Because although they exist, one may search their whole lifetime to find them. I found this poem to a love story as well. I enjoyed the read. I liked it a lot. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/3/2021 2:13:00 PM
Lol who you telling girl! To find such a catch would be heaven! Thank you!:)
Date: 6/9/2021 7:49:00 PM
Oh, for such a half to complete the whole! Lovely penned, Brenda! :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/3/2021 2:12:00 PM
Gershon thank you so much!:)
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